I liked the way he walks, looks pretty good. Handling of the cameras is also good. You need to improve the voices and improve the quality and also a bit of acting.
I give you a 10/10 to motivate you to move forward :)
creo que tienes bastante talento, pero debes de mejorar mucho la historia, pues al principio no hay una introduccion para guiar al que ve la pelicula de que se trata, me gusta mucho tu manejo de la camara, te felicito, sigue adelante
Gracias, intenté compensar ya después con ahí un pequeño escrito ,pero supongo que no es lo mismo, si pienso hacer las cosas más claras con mi siguiente animación.
This animation charm me, I will adhere to my favorite, thank you for this gift, you get the same note that the dog bag skater ( 10 ) what is the happy for you?
for serte honest, to be your first animation this or, but I advise you that next him DES but depth to your drawings, sees a little flat or with Egyptian style, where the prespective does not correspond, the sound this enough one or, the introduction this little one, and takes much, is necessary to go to the grain, with which you want to demonstrate. He is everything, luck.
Mr-Man
orviton Animations
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Rated 5 / 5 stars July 3, 2011
Nice work Dude.
I liked the way he walks, looks pretty good. Handling of the cameras is also good. You need to improve the voices and improve the quality and also a bit of acting.
I give you a 10/10 to motivate you to move forward :)
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 22, 2008
buena animacion
creo que tienes bastante talento, pero debes de mejorar mucho la historia, pues al principio no hay una introduccion para guiar al que ve la pelicula de que se trata, me gusta mucho tu manejo de la camara, te felicito, sigue adelante
Gracias, intenté compensar ya después con ahí un pequeño escrito ,pero supongo que no es lo mismo, si pienso hacer las cosas más claras con mi siguiente animación.
Gustavo M.
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 23, 2007
Exelente Animacion
Te felicito Augusto, muy buenos los graficos y el acompañamiento quedo impecable, sigue asi amigo
10/10
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 5, 2007
Art !
this is ART !! 10 !
thank you very much indeed!
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 18, 2007
This is ART !!
This animation charm me, I will adhere to my favorite, thank you for this gift, you get the same note that the dog bag skater ( 10 ) what is the happy for you?
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 5, 2007
Exelent
I realy enjoy this film :)
Rated 4 / 5 stars September 29, 2007
Great !
for serte honest, to be your first animation this or, but I advise you that next him DES but depth to your drawings, sees a little flat or with Egyptian style, where the prespective does not correspond, the sound this enough one or, the introduction this little one, and takes much, is necessary to go to the grain, with which you want to demonstrate. He is everything, luck.
Rated 4 / 5 stars June 16, 2007
Good Work !
Realy Nice work
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 16, 2007
Good Work!
Very Good Work! i Enjoy this animation, Tanks !
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 29, 2007
Great Job!
in order to have the age that you have, it is an extraordinary work, continuous thus friend, you arrived far